Across the Deep Blue Sea

Across the Deep Blue Sea is a series that I wish might become reality one day, as a web series at least. It's the coming-of-age story of Mike, whose mom is skeptical about the existence of merpeople and whose dad is an expert in them. Dad told him that he had body-switching experiences with merselves, and for Mike, these occasional swaps become the real source of his dad's interest. So far I wrote most of what seems to be chapter 1 of it, but I abandoned it for no reason.

If you want to read chapter 1 of it: docs.google.com/document/d/1aA4o65fJH-e0ZiwqikbWx6bRQdrUQ5qFasZgSv6qL_Y/edit?usp=sharing

Feel free to make any suggestions.